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Bella

Reflective blog- Do I need to become a reflective practitioner?

Well written blog post. Very clear and concise, it makes the reader very clear quite quickly on what is going to be spoken about and how. The use of dot points is effective, and helps the reader follow the ideas being presented.

The use of some pictures would be effective in engaging readers. Secondly, when talking about the process of reflection, in the fourth paragraph “identify your reaction to the situation….”. Brackets could then be used to state which part of the process this is e.g. “identify your reaction to the situation” (self-awareness) and so on. To help the reader follow the argument being made.

Overall great post.

Caitlin- Could I live Without Digital and Communication Technologies?

Great Blog post. Your arguments are strong and persuasive, and the use of evidence supports your argument well. The formatting of this post is clear and easy to follow and the way you have written this is blog is engaging and interesting. My only critique of this blog post would be to include some photos or images (could use political cartoons, or other photos) to capture the audience further in you blog post. Otherwise this is a well written, clear and engaging piece. Great Job.